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I mean you can use PG cussing. I mean it's okay to have a few, but don't go overboard. Don't bash yourself your doing fine, especially for a first try to see what I like. Im supprised anyone did as much as you did just for one post. Glad to see someone caring

Holy crap that's a lot of info. I read it though, and I must say you are a good script writer, Just need to cut down on the cussing. The story line seems good, but remember this will be seen by 99% people who don't know what subspace is or how it works, so if a item or tool is referenced from the game, make sure to hint or show enough detail to make sure the viewer understands it or how it will be used. Graphics can show how or what it does / works. The story line is cool, and the script is as well, but do remember I want it to be a comedy based off of galactic warfare, so if you can introduce the comedy theme as a dominance on the script, I will say your scripts are perfect for the project. I appreciate Root's contributing work towards the project, but seems like we have a pro storyline-writer on our hands now. We will see what this guy can do. Overall, revise your script to preform the edits i have posted here, and I will use it for the pilot episode. Maybe we can use you for the concept, and get someone whose good at improv / comedy.

Well I am basically stalled until all the sound is done.

Rootbear if you can get your voice to my targeted needs, feel free to send me another recording. Oh and when you add me on msn and want to send a recording I wont msg you but accept you.

I wanted casual knock-off of a galactic war between all the ships... like red vs. blue vs. green blah blah blah all ships own team. I wanted to have this done to take the seriousness out of a galactic war and turn it into our personality of how subspace is played. I really want a direction, but a foundation cant be built on-top of one person's imagination. This will be built out of not one person's experience, but all of our experienced blended into a showcase to show the public how we make war fun. Please tell me, where you think i should go. I want to provide the extra push.. in fact, I want to be the driver too, but it's lonely in this mini-van on the road trip to advertising success

It's not one, it's a recording of text. I like creating.

If you have not noticed, any contributors of the smallest degree is all excepted. Understand that if anything you want to play with go right ahead. Enjoy; have fun. Please if you really want to, don't be afraid to step forward. I will have to be critical about voice acting because that's a critical spot. I just need good gamer/pilot voices.

KEEP THIS TOPIC CLEAN Learn to fucking read. I fucking need to get ownership of this topic and ill clean these stupid convos out. If your contributing, then please post here. Learn to post on my other topic, and if you hate the script, make a better one. I can't make a script because i took 30 min sitting with a blank paper trying to come up with one. You think it's shit, contribute, im sure 20 fucking minutes of your life will not kill you. KEEP THIS TOPIC CLEAN

Is there anyone with a voice that's more alive, excited, and very fluently? That's what I'm looking for right now.

.?go zone66 in tw. also, i think some exist in the old maps archives in www.subspacedownloads.com

justemail them to me i guess. JoshuaEdwards911@msn.com

If you fix the proportions of the wings, fix up the gray boxes on the sides of the cockpit, and fix the back end by the engine, i'd say it'd be good enough to add textures and do finishing touches on it.

Look forward to that

Is this being done in blender?

It seems like you are going somewhere with that, but it will take quite a few more edits to get it in proportions with the VIE Terrier. Try fixing up the wings, and the gray areas around the cockpit.

Hmm.. rootbear, If you can give more of a umf to talking, with less breathing, you'd be good for george most likely, if not bob. i lold at the pilot xD (means no for that) I used to be on msn so much, but now I have a job so bleh

When it comes to our case, remember that polygon counts are not a issue, meaning our gfx is actually pre-rendered, so it does not load the model when in play. smoothing it alot and decreasing the cockpit bubble will make it look alot better. other than that, you basically have the proportions down. good work on first try.

Comon people I need voices.

Not needed.

Make something for ya. Talk about yourself. Try doh reh meh etc. it's no big deal, just to hear it is good enough for me to know

I sort of think opposite, though it's smarter this way, so I will not have to do the 3D, then get the recording done, then have to revise (do 3D again) to make them run the same length.

It's what I said in the voices info on signup. anyways record when you can. (any by record i mean the tryout thing not the script, unless you want to do the script.

<--((*SIGN-UP RULES*))--> Okay, This is the sign-up spot for all our episodes we will make in the future. VOICE ACTORS Here's how voice sign-up works. You give me a record of you talking in your voice or w/e. and I will be the judge of the voices for now. (I'd seriously love a "Fat Albert" voice if we ever get that darn Leviathan model done in the future) I will also need someone who can edit the recording that can make them sound more like transmission (like NASA, but clear enough to be understood.) The good thing about this is that people can do recordings on their own (provided good recording with no background static or noise if possible), and we can put them together much easier. SCRIPT WRITERS Script writing is free and open, but the final scripts will be viewed and revised several times over. Go ahead and spill your scripts if you wish to, and if your scripts are used (or parts) we will give you your credit due. 3D MODELERS / ANIMATORS I call 3D animation, unless Diwa, Gannon, or any other wish to participate in the animation or artistic scenery of this project. I will automatically give them the credit due for the work they have done on the models. The way I will do this is first getting the recording done so I can make the 3D animation very accurate and precise to the vocals. KEEP THIS TOPIC CLEAN CONTRIBUTORS ARE GREATLY APPRECIATED --------------------------------------------- September 9th, 2009 EPISODE 0 (PILOT) Under Construction ---------------------------------------------

If you can do that & add the textures to it and make it work for blender or importing to blender I would be very happy.

That video was a like the most basic test i could do. Wasent a showcase, just a "Show can" (meaning I can do animation)